Sunday need not be your only day
To relax, chill out and lie amongst hay,
For summer delivers such ample chance,
To procrastinate, dwell, no need to finance.
Because freedom is free, it costs not a bean
Until you wake up one day and you’re just a has been.
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Um. would ‘and you’re just a has been’ work for last phrase?
I like it tho.
I toyed with this…!!
Consider it an edit – thanks Jessica, I appreciate your input (just don’t expect any editorial fees)
interesting poem.
dont be lazy
It can’t be helped
Thanks for reading!